The Graveyard Of Extraneous Characters

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The gnarled woman leaned on the shovel, sweat glistening her brow as she pointed to the headstone growing out of her garden of graves.

“Over there is Charlie P. Marks. Handsome fellow. The third part of a love triangle, he was. Turns out he just dragged down the story.” She tapped her shovel on the hole she was standing in. “This grave is for a poor girl named Leticia Cragg. Poor girl. Couldn’t decide if she was a villain or sidekick. Just waffled around in the way, hiding the real story.

“Those graves are where adorable pets are buried. They waddle around a moment, adorable and making the protagonist relatable, but then are forgotten for pages and pages. When readers ask, ‘Where’d the dog go?’ and the writer can’t answer it, the poor dog ends up here, buried and forgotten.”

She patted her dirt-encrusted fingers on the girl’s arm. “Don’t you worry, though. Some of these folk will come to life again. There may come a day where Miss Cragg and Mr. Marks fall in love through the cleverness of a dog. It could be a lovely story. You never do know.”

Many a writer’s imagination has a battlefield where ideas and drafts have been played out. The ground is littered with the threads of ideas that never fully took form, cities and civilizations which remain half-built, and meandering subplots falling to waste. Characters, extracted from their original tale, are now wandering and trying to find another narrative to call home.

I have many of these characters: Best friends who became inessential, siblings who had no personality, quirky side-characters who were there are more show than substance, pets who were often forgotten.

Some characters have fared better than these wandering souls. Some have either found a new home where they are more fully fleshed out. Others are re-grafted into their initial story, pushing forward with a greater purpose.

There are other characters who remain in their native narrative, who play a great purpose until reaching a climactic point. Then, the narrative flows on and the main character has grown past needing the minor character. What must be done with these now aimless characters? Should they be extricated, or should they be written out of the tale?

Or is it time for the character to die?

Has this character become more interesting in death and its repercussions than in the character’s own existence?

This question came to my mind this past few weeks, as several major characters died on television. This includes:

Spoilers

  • Will Gardner (Josh Charles), The Good Wife
  • Jason Neville (J. D. Pardo), Revolution
  • James (Dan Bucatinsky), Scandal
  • Neil / Baelfire (Dylan Schmid), Once Upon A Time
  • And many people on The Walking Dead (which will soon follow with many more as Game of Thrones ramps up its new season)… This is probably why both shows are too gory for me.

In film and television series there are two reasons a character is slain by the cruel stroke of a writer’s keyboard:

  1. The actor’s contract has not been renewed
    • Either because the actor is ready to move on to other projects, or because of conflict and drama on set.
  2. For narrative purposes (and often ratings boosts).

Below is a brief analysis of slain television and film characters, some recent and some long departed. Were these good storytelling choices, or opportunistic moments written for shock-value, or had the character lived past their story-potential?

Death By Contract

Will Gardner (Josh Charles), The Good Wife

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Killed By: Shooting in a courtroom, by his own client.

Behind The Scenes: According to an article on EW.com, Josh Charles was already ready to move on to other projects at the end of Season 4. He was persuaded to stay on through most of Season 5, allowing the writers to give him a proper send-off.

Story-Potential: The Good Wife has made many bold moves this season, with the breaking off of a rival law firm, and an investigation into Peter Florrick’s election. With his death, even these uncertainties become more uncertain. Will characters who have drifted apart come together through his death, or will this create more rifts?

Pierce Hawthorne (Chevy Chase), Community

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Killed By: [I don’t remember, and I can’t find the info online]

Behind The Scenes: There has been long-standing conflict between Chase and the showrunners for Community, so it was little surprise his last full episode was Season 4. Death was the best way to write him out of the show.

Story-Potential: Pierce’s death allowed the writers to have a catalyst for Troy (Donald Glover) to leave the show, and for Jeff (Joel McHale) to learn to deal with aging. And, it allowed the entrance of another crotchety old man, but with a keener eye for reality, Professor Buzz Hickey (Jonathon Banks).

Matthew Crawley (Dan Stevens), Downton Abbey

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Killed By: Car

Behind The Scenes: Dan Stevens wanted out of the show and to venture into new horizons. The writers gave him the opportunity.

Story-Potential: With Matthew Crawley’s death, Lady Mary can now have various love-triangles… Actually, confession: I need to watch Downton Abbey, and haven’t ventured in yet. I can only be addicted

George McFly (Crispin Glover), Back To The Future

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Killed By: Biff, and timey-wimey-wibbly-wobbliness

Behind The Scenes: After the success of the first movie, Crispin Glover wanted a higher paycheck and more major role. Instead of agreeing, the film producers wrote him out of the sequels as much as possible. There’s a reason 2 and 3 only have George McFly in the background or at a distance.

Story-Potential: George McFly’s death is the inspiration for the dark, dystopian version of Hill Valley after Old Biff goes back in time to help Young Biff become rich. It is also his death which pushes Marty and drives him to keep pushing to go back to the past to save the future.

 

Death By Plotline

Neil / Baelfire (Dylan Schmid), Once Upon A Time

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Killed By: Sacrificing himself to resurrect/restore his father (it’s complicated).

Story-Potential: While it appeared the current half of this season was gearing up for a love triangle between Emma, Hook, and Neil, that has been put to rest. I may upset some fans, but I never found Neil a compelling character. His purpose always seemed more of a motivator for other characters – the drive for Rumplestiltsken to have Regina make the curse, the father of Henry, and so on. In fact, he suffers from a Damsel-In-Distress problem, all ways the rescued, rarely the rescuer.

With his death, the evilness of the Wicked Witch is further proven, Rumplestiltsken’s return to stability seems less hopeful, Emma has a chance to mourn, and Hook has a better chance at winning Emma’s affections. (Though, considering the three men Emma has had romances with in the show have either ended up dead or as a flying monkey, Hook may be better served looking elsewhere.)

Jason Neville (J. D. Pardo), Revolution

Killed By: Shot by love-interest after proving himself a brain-washed badguy.

Story-Potential: Jason’s father, Captain Neville, has always been the most interesting character on the show. Anything that can spur on his character into further villainy is good for the show. Also, Charlie has to deal with killing a man who was so nearly her friend/romantic interest.

Penny (Felicia Day), Dr. Horrible’s Sing-Along-Blog

 

Killed By: Dr. Horrible’s Death Ray

Story-Potential: Joss Whedon likes killing characters people have grown attached to (see this list). I’m really mentioning this because I think the world needs the long-rumored sequel to Dr. Horrible. Penny could always come back as an evil clone. Whedon could always see if Neil Patrick Harris and Nathan Fillion are available during his next hiatus, since this is what he did during his last one:

Boromir (Sean Bean), The Fellowship of the Ring

Killed By: In one of Sean Bean’s more famous deaths, Boromir fights of a group of Uruk Hai in order to give the Hobbits a chance to escape and destroy the One Ring.

Story-Potential: Boromir’s sacrifice is made to redeem him after he is corrupted by the ring. It later plays into difficulties as Gandalf attempts to help Gondor defend itself from Sauron’s forces while Boromir’s father goes mad.

Obi-Wan Kenobi (Alec Guinness), Star Wars

Killed By: Darth Vader’s lightsaber (and only the second person killed by Vader in the film).

Story-Potential: In one of the behind-the-scenes documentaries I’ve watched, there was mention that George Lucas realized in an early draft of Star Wars: A New Hope that Obi-Wan would be standing in the side-lines without narrative purpose after escaping the Death Star. At that point, it is Luke’s time to take command and save the world.

With Obi-Wan’s death, he is able to “become more powerful than [Vader] can imagine”, by both driving Luke forward and being able to reach to him from beyond the grave. It is Obi-Wan’s sacrifice that adds emotional gravity to the first Star Wars film made, and leads the the darker emotional depths explored in The Empire Strike’s Back.

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Most of these characters had reached a narrative point where only a major life-event could create enough story for them to continue. If not, they would soon weigh down the overall story, and become extraneous.

And thus, in death they become greater than in life, and thus we have one solution to our characters lost in the wastelands of creative development.

  • Do you think any of these characters had become extraneous?
  • What do you with characters that are dead weight?
  • Does anyone else find it interesting that most of this list is men – including recently deceased characters? Am I missing slain female characters, or are there disproportionately less important female characters who have been killed off for ratings? Is this a symptom of the lopsided ratio of men to women in film and television?
  • What is the best way to bring a character back to life?

Side Note

Speaking of shows which often kill off major characters, there are growing discussions of a Battlestar Galactica reboot. The creator of the original series Glen A. Larsen is producing a film version in conjunction with Universal. I’m on the fence about this news. What do you think?

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23 thoughts on “The Graveyard Of Extraneous Characters

  1. I’m curious in regards to Game of Thrones and The Walking Dead. Do you think a series can reach a point where character death no longer means anything, so writers have to find other ways to shock the viewer? I’ve heard from a few Game of Thrones fans (friends) that watch solely for the deaths and not to be shocked, but because they found the body count humorous.

    • I haven’t actually seen it, but I’m fairly sure the ridiculously high body count is the entire point of the cult classic Evil Dead series.
      I think too many ‘shocking’ moments packed together can leave an audience numb. I know there have been some books and movies I have emotionally checked out of as characters are killed off along the way. Actually, that’s how I felt toward the end of Mockingjay from the Hunger Games series.

  2. AHHHHHHHHH MATTHEW?! WHY????
    I’m not a fan of him leaving Downton. Mary’s storyline has turned ridiculous and dumb with a love triangle in the Christmas special that made me want to hurl. And yet…and yet…I will still obsessively watch it. Because it’s so effing good. Everyone keeps saying that the Countess Dowager (Maggie Smith) is going to die. Every season that rumor pops up. But she’s still around. And last season they actually fooled us and she got horribly sick, but ended up living through the ordeal stuck around. Myself, and many others, were very happy about it.
    Matthew is one death I strongly disagree with, though I guess you can’t really stop the actor for wanting to pursue other stuff (Downton is the best he’ll ever do *cough* *cough*).

  3. When it comes to killing off characters I always think of M*A*S*H. No one anticipated Henry Blake’s death, yet considering the circumstances it made sense. To me the death of a character needs to move the plot line along in an organic way– and not be a stunt to increase viewership. Interesting topic, this one. Ditto what Harliqueen said.

    • I didn’t even think of Henry Blake’s death. I think it’s symbolic of what makes MASH one of the greatest shows of all time – it mixes great humor with real life-and-death moments. Everything has a consequence.
      It’s also one of the most tragic off-screen reasons for a character death.

  4. These are great! I never knew that about Crispin Glover. I always wondered why he never played a prominent role in the subsequent films.

    Here are a couple of more to add to the list. Richard S. Castellano who played Clemenza in The Godfather, wanted more money. In Godfather II, Coppola killed him off. Similarly, in Godfather III, the same thing happened to Robert Duvall’s character Tom Hagen. Too bad because the movies would have been interesting with both characters reprising their roles!

    • I think I first learned about the drama around Crispin Glover’s contract from listening to the Audio Commentary from Back to the Future.

      If we did all of movie history, a book could probably be written about major characters and their demise.
      I wonder what that conversation is like behind the scenes. “If you ask for too much money, we’re going to bump off your character.”

  5. Ah, a timely post as many series are working their way up to cliff-hangers at the ends of their seasons. I was actually thinking similar things in regards to Agents if S.H.I.E.L.D. on Tuesday. I won’t give spoilers, but a number of characters were killed or revealed as traitors or switched sides as H.Y.D.R.A. reared its ugly head.

    As I see it, the first ten or so episodes of Agents of S.H.I.E.L.D. have been team-building by Coulson, without much of a connecting plot. The stakes were personal between characters. The series wasn’t really gripping, but I kept watching because I enjoy Clark Gregg’s performance as Coulson. Now the stakes are much higher. Now we know characters can die, not just hover at the edge of death but return hale and hearty in future episodes. It was a great episode and I’m glad I’ve kept watching. Although I will miss (name withheld) because that was the only female authority figure in the whole series.

    Perhaps the experience is different in shows like Walking Dead and Game of Thrones (I don’t watch either because I don’t have cable, but I probably wouldn’t even if I could). As you mention, they have to find other ways to create tension than carefully orchestrated deaths.

    • There be many dangerous spoilers in this comment.

      I had actually given up on Agents of Shield until a couple episodes ago. I went ahead and tried it again, and enjoyed how they got the characters to gel together and work as a team. Now, I have hope for the show’s future. I’m looking forward to how everything will fall out.

  6. Wow! I haven’t watched Revolution since season one…they killed Jason?!!? Whoa.

    I got raked over the coals by one of my betas for a particular death in one of my books — won’t say who or what to avoid spoilers. It was hard, but it was definitely necessary to push another character in a direction he otherwise wouldn’t have gone.

    Great post.

  7. There’s actually many female characters you missed

    I realize this mostly had to do with movie and television characters, but video game characters also have many prominent deaths, many of then female.

    Before I get into it though, they’re was one episode in Star Trek TOS where both a redshirt and a female crew member were turned in to blocks of Styrofoam by a powerful alien and Kirk had to choose which one.
    Turns out, he chose the redshirt, who was also an African American. The effect clearly caused some turmoil in Kirk ‘ character. That was an extremely controversial moment in television history.

    Also star trek related is the demise of Lt. Tasha Yar early in TNG due to the actor wanting to leave, I think. Her death, while senseless (Picard’s quote) played much into the future of the show and she actually made reappearances later in alternative timeliness, as a villain, in the finale, and in a retcon of her death.

    However, another medium to explore could be video games, the most popular one being the death of Aeris from Final Fantasy 7. This event sent shock waves in the gaming world and many gamers lamented the loss and some even sent death threats to the creators.
    Another gaming example is the death of Lucas and Claus’ mother from the unreleased game Mother 3 (aka Earthbound series). The characters in the game are like 10 years old, so seeing how they deal with the loss of their mother is reflective of the title, Mother.
    Anyway, just a thought on looking in to other sources.
    I typed this on my Note 3 which hopefully explains some of m my errors in writing.

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